Tuesday, March 23, 2010

A circle on the beach


















Here hide and seek with you I play
As tranced shanks run afoul never
If sand lit upon morning's first ray
You’d seek to remain hidden forever.

 

12 comments:

Kay said...

i wanna play... :)

Fareed said...

Dive in :)

(¯`•._.•[Raajii]•._.•´¯) said...

this is very beautiful :-).

~*~ Jal Pari ~*~ said...

Beautiful!

~RainDrops. said...

I hope you find who ever you're looking for :)

Fareed said...

Thanks Raaji and Jal for keeping tabs.

RainDrops... come over here.

Mademoiselle Deva said...

I love it! I badly want to play hide and seek now! If you know what I mean!

Fareed said...

The use of Hide-n-Seek in my poem is anything but the kiddish game of the same name.

Esther said...

I love it ! =)

Fareed said...

Thanks for that =)

divsi said...

:) hey first tym here:) awesum stufff!!!
:D
lovely lines!!!

Fareed said...

*thumbs up*