Sunday, April 11, 2010

Autism
















The syndrome may prolong my stir
But crossing any bridge, I admit,
For you a thousand times over
Wearies me not the slightest bit.


  

16 comments:

Cynthia said...

outstanding photograph/image WOW.
and the quote is the perfect
marriage.

Anonymous said...

... hmmm ... that's stunning verse ... with a stunning picture ... "the syndrome may prolong my stir" ... is a seething expression ... it's humming in my ears ... a whisper of a buzz ... lingering with a dash of longing ... a hint of submission ... "wearies me not the slightest bit" ... a note that reigns ... somewhere between inertia and exertion ... fascinating ...

serah

http://www.writerscafe.org/serah
http://thefourthdimensionblog.blogspot.com/

Fareed said...

Zzzzanks.

Anonymous said...

... you're very welcome! ...

serah
http://www.writerscafe.org/serah
http://thefourthdimensionblog.blogs

MothSmokeLover said...

Simply amazing! Can't believe I am just reading this.

P.s. Miss your write ups :)

Fareed said...

Hey, hey. Howdy Jal? Watch this space for the return.

Vinutha N said...

Wonderful blog ! Touching lines :)

Fareed said...

*wink*

Sh@s said...

Very optimistic.

Rabab Khan said...

Your words are very very deep. :) I feel like the words are so heavy they drag one deeper into the thought.

~RainDrops said...

Sweet.

Fareed said...

Shas - Yeah.

Insanely Insane - And I presume you enjoyed it so thanks.

Raindrops - Geez, I'm diabetic.

~RainDrops said...

Don't worry, it wont kill you :)

Ezazi said...

"For you a thousand times over"
Do I spot a Khaled Hosseini fan here? :P

Fareed said...

I despise him, but this line spurred the poem.

Anonymous said...

i found this expression kind of um cute.