... hmmm ... that's stunning verse ... with a stunning picture ... "the syndrome may prolong my stir" ... is a seething expression ... it's humming in my ears ... a whisper of a buzz ... lingering with a dash of longing ... a hint of submission ... "wearies me not the slightest bit" ... a note that reigns ... somewhere between inertia and exertion ... fascinating ...
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outstanding photograph/image WOW.
and the quote is the perfect
marriage.
... hmmm ... that's stunning verse ... with a stunning picture ... "the syndrome may prolong my stir" ... is a seething expression ... it's humming in my ears ... a whisper of a buzz ... lingering with a dash of longing ... a hint of submission ... "wearies me not the slightest bit" ... a note that reigns ... somewhere between inertia and exertion ... fascinating ...
serah
http://www.writerscafe.org/serah
http://thefourthdimensionblog.blogspot.com/
Zzzzanks.
... you're very welcome! ...
serah
http://www.writerscafe.org/serah
http://thefourthdimensionblog.blogs
Simply amazing! Can't believe I am just reading this.
P.s. Miss your write ups :)
Hey, hey. Howdy Jal? Watch this space for the return.
Wonderful blog ! Touching lines :)
*wink*
Very optimistic.
Your words are very very deep. :) I feel like the words are so heavy they drag one deeper into the thought.
Sweet.
Shas - Yeah.
Insanely Insane - And I presume you enjoyed it so thanks.
Raindrops - Geez, I'm diabetic.
Don't worry, it wont kill you :)
"For you a thousand times over"
Do I spot a Khaled Hosseini fan here? :P
I despise him, but this line spurred the poem.
i found this expression kind of um cute.
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