A Blotter Paper: A circle on the beach

Tuesday, March 23, 2010

A circle on the beach

Here hide and seek with you I play

As tranced shanks run afoul never

If sand lit upon morning's first ray

You’d seek to remain hidden forever.

11 comments:

Kay said...: i wanna play... :); March 23, 2010 at 3:55 AM
Fareed said...: Dive in :); March 24, 2010 at 10:40 PM
WritingsForLife said...: this is very beautiful :-).; March 25, 2010 at 1:43 AM
~RainDrops said...: I hope you find who ever you're looking for :); March 27, 2010 at 8:25 PM
Fareed said...: Thanks Raaji and Jal for keeping tabs.

RainDrops... come over here.; March 27, 2010 at 10:35 PM
Mademoiselle Deva said...: I love it! I badly want to play hide and seek now! If you know what I mean!; March 28, 2010 at 5:47 PM
Fareed said...: The use of Hide-n-Seek in my poem is anything but the kiddish game of the same name.; March 28, 2010 at 7:30 PM
Esther said...: I love it ! =); April 2, 2010 at 12:06 AM
Fareed said...: Thanks for that =); April 2, 2010 at 2:32 AM
divsi said...: :) hey first tym here:) awesum stufff!!!
:D
lovely lines!!!; April 21, 2010 at 9:41 PM
Fareed said...: *thumbs up*; April 24, 2010 at 9:06 AM

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